My Pitch was presented to the class.
Here is the feedback i received:
Positive: Your slides have fantastic design consistency and look like they have been professionally art-worked. Your pitch was delivered confidently and professionally. Excellent to see you considering connotations of specific graphics. I was also impressed that you identified the “fun/ child- like style” graphics as a marketing strategy to attract the target audience of festival goers. What type of graphics would appeal to your target audience, what demographic are they?
Challenge: Try not to used pixelated images in presentations (last slide.) The Glastonbury font is in the Cubist style (a major art movement, see Picasso/ George Braques) and you could explore this further in your own designs. Also seeing as you identified the photographic background as an aspect you would like to explore could you design a photoshoot to do this? What would you photograph and how would it suit your aims and theme? Try to use subject specific terms like kerning on your blog and presentations to show off your developing knowledge. Perhaps a Q&A slide at the end would have encouraged more group discussion?